I'd have gave up after Chapter Seven
Yeah, 10/10.
The music? I say 12/10.
Hawtorn has spoken 🗣️🔥
After reading this, the strongest feeling isn’t shock, but a quiet sense of “this really went too far.”
The laughter hits harder than anger—it feels like what happens when everything finally collapses.
The pace is fast, the tension sticks, and even knowing something bad is coming, it’s hard to stop reading.
Well done my brother !🥃
Appreciate that comment my brother. Warm words. ✍🏾💯
Anytime, my brother !🥃
Hmmm. It’s about a woman cheating and a man who is certain he owns her. I’d say it happens but I don’t like what it implies. Tbh
Have you read of all the chapters?
No. I haven’t
You've got time now. nine chapters in and about eleven chapters to go. You will find interest in these Saturday Drama 🎭
Excellent
💯💯
Ahhh this is great writing, the pace is thrilling 🙌🏽🙌🏽
You can never go wrong with rhythm and short storytelling 🥂
Yeah, 10/10.
The music? I say 12/10.
Hawtorn has spoken 🗣️🔥
After reading this, the strongest feeling isn’t shock, but a quiet sense of “this really went too far.”
The laughter hits harder than anger—it feels like what happens when everything finally collapses.
The pace is fast, the tension sticks, and even knowing something bad is coming, it’s hard to stop reading.
Well done my brother !🥃
Appreciate that comment my brother. Warm words. ✍🏾💯
Anytime, my brother !🥃
Hmmm. It’s about a woman cheating and a man who is certain he owns her. I’d say it happens but I don’t like what it implies. Tbh
Have you read of all the chapters?
No. I haven’t
You've got time now. nine chapters in and about eleven chapters to go. You will find interest in these Saturday Drama 🎭
Excellent
💯💯
Ahhh this is great writing, the pace is thrilling 🙌🏽🙌🏽
You can never go wrong with rhythm and short storytelling 🥂