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Rhea Daniel's avatar

Stirred, frightened and intrigued by the story. Is this the end or will there be more? Of this story?

Mr.10's avatar

Rhea, that reaction? Stirred, frightened, intrigued — that's exactly what this story came to do. It played its part. This piece was just the door, the world behind it goes deeper. If this moved you, you haven't seen nothing yet. Join the community and see what we're building. Hope to see you locked in.

Hina Gondal's avatar

I loved your story 🫶

Mr.10's avatar

Thanks a lot Hina 👏🏾

HVR's avatar

I feel like I was there. I know people like this. I've heard of it happening. You managed to get it all in here. I won't steal, so 11/11.

Mr.10's avatar

I see your taking the ™ seriously haha. Thank you for your response. Means a lot from a legendary writer.

HVR's avatar

Legendary? Who?

You did well.

Mr.10's avatar

😎😎😎

Miles Hack's avatar

Leaping to a Lilly pad from the pond we’ve always known. Props to all the endurance through the heavy-heart experiences — I’m sorry it happened this way, but I know that’s no adequate consolation

This was a great piece, thanks for sharing it.

Mr.10's avatar

10/10

Robert's avatar

It's funny you said about having a girl everyone wants. I have that here. Hina and I are exclusive planning our future now.

I am going to read your work again. It has an enormity to it.

Mr.10's avatar

Congratulations to both you and Hina.

I appreciate the great “lock in” you are doing with our publication. Thanks for the comment a lot.

Jack W. Guffey's avatar

"Just a quiet exit, like a woman who already knew how the film ended and didn’t want to watch it again."

Thank you. Everyone writes for their own reasons. Yours is truth.